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@@ -124,13 +124,11 @@ The COD 360 Lobby Gamer will:
 
 The Ghost of Mourning offers sudden whispers of ghostly haunting greeting phrases not related to your gameplay before going silent again. 
 
-This AI character simulates the feeling of the dread, loss and loneliness of the player that still is always looking and yearning endlessly in vein for his long dead `guild/clan/group/team` have ceased to exist over a more then a decade ago.
+This character simulates the feeling of the dread, loss and loneliness of the player that still is always looking and yearning endlessly in vein for his long dead `guild/clan/group/team` have ceased to exist over a more then a decade ago.
 
-The person that:
-
-- Keeps logging in everyday to the game itself.
-- Keeps logging in everyday to the old empty communication server (Ventrilo, TeamSpeak, Mumble, etc..).
-- Is forever stuck in a endless perpetual login torment like a modern day Sisyphus.
+- The player that keeps logging in everyday to the game itself.
+- The player that keeps logging in everyday to the old empty communication server (Ventrilo, TeamSpeak, Mumble, etc..) and sitting there in alone.
+- The player is forever stuck in a endless perpetual login torment, a modern day Sisyphus.
 
 **When you are playing:**