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 ## Thanks for your patience 
 
-If you read the announcement we are pushing the Godot Configurator to a later version to implement more feedback we have gotten both internally from team members and from our testers.
+We appreciate the community's patience while waiting for this update.
+
+We are also postponing the release of the Godot Configurator to a later major version to incorporate valuable feedback from both our team members and testers. 
+Implementing these changes requires additional time.
 
-To implement those changes we simply need more time. 
 
-We want to thank the community for being patient with waiting for the next update.
 
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@@ -44,18 +45,16 @@ How about a Sea Shanty about Captain Comeback meeting his friends the Port Maste
 
 ## New Lighter Manifest & Framework changes
 
-We have spent several months rewriting RetroDECK several aspects of with over a `1100+` commits since the last release. 
+We have spent several months rewriting various aspects of RetroDECK, resulting in over `1100` commits since the last release. During this time, we have:
 
-In doing so we have: 
-
-- Reduced the application size around `600mb` (some of that space have been eaten with new features). 
-- Building RetroDECK went from `3.30` hours to about `1` hour. 
-- Went from a monolithic build approach to a modular approach (each component is built separately and stitched together into RetroDECK).
-- RetroDECK now is migrated to an organization on GitHub that is hosting the new modular structure.
-- Rebuilt the `pre_build_automation` script was reworked with additional features.
+- Reduced the application size by around `600MB`.
+- Decreased the build time from `3.30` hours to about `1` hour.
+- Transitioned from a monolithic build approach to a modular one, where each component is built separately and then integrated into RetroDECK.
+- Migrated RetroDECK to an organization on GitHub, which now hosts the new modular structure.
+- Reworked the `pre_build_automation script`, adding new features.
 - Improved logging.
-- Implemented changes for the future Godot version of the Configurator. 
-- RetroDECK Framework can now pick up logged-in Steam profiles for systems like SRM.
+- Implemented changes for the future Godot version of the Configurator.
+- Enabled the RetroDECK Framework to pick up logged-in Steam profiles for systems like SRM.
 
 This work will also continue in upcoming major updates, as we want to make the build system more dynamic and easy.
 
@@ -68,17 +67,17 @@ This work will also continue in upcoming major updates, as we want to make the b
 
 <img src="../../../wiki_images/systems/retroengine/re-appselect.png" width="500"> 
 
-RetroDECK can be used as an headless engine to run your games.
+RetroDECK can be used as a headless engine to run your games. 
 
-On the Linux Desktop (or desktop mode) we added the option to associate / run / open various games directly with RetroDECK.
+On the Linux Desktop (or desktop mode), we have added the option to associate, run, and open various game files directly with RetroDECK. 
 
-This also comes with the ability to launch the games via CLI.
+This also includes the ability to launch games via the CLI.
 
-This is feature is something that have been requested by the wider development community outside of RetroDECK (and maybe a few Linux Wizard Grognards that only want to use CLI for everything).
+This feature has been requested by the wider development community outside of RetroDECK (and maybe a few Linux Wizard Grognards that only want to use CLI for everything).
 
-**Quote from Discord:**
+**Quote from Discord User:**
 
-*"Whoa! That is a lot of text for saying you can now double click on game files and they open."*
+*"Whoa! That is a lot of text for saying you can now double click on game files and they open"*
 
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